Comments on: The Birth of an Anticipation

By: Phantom Voice

Phantom Voice — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 03:10:41 +0000

@rachel - Thanks for the great compliment!

By: rachel

rachel — Sat, 02 Aug 2008 21:51:34 +0000

Absolutely wonderful. I really enjoyed this.

By: Phantom Voice

Phantom Voice — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 16:44:20 +0000

@Margaret - Thanks much! Congrats on the 5 years for you.

By: Margaret

Margaret — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 16:23:33 +0000

I love this poem, Saph. Oh and congratulations on 12 years! Ken and I have made it to the quarter-century mark and I hereby wish that for you guys as well.

Keep up the writing!

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By: Phantom Voice

Phantom Voice — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 15:40:34 +0000

@Gary - Yep. It’s me. Using this site to house my fiction writing. Some of it is also over at Saphrym… but only for link purposes. Any new fiction will be written here.

By: Gary R. Hess

Gary R. Hess — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 05:32:55 +0000

Hah, Saph! I didn’t realize this was your blog until your comment… then I looked up at the header and saw a.k.a. Saphrym.

By: Phantom Voice

Phantom Voice — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 01:10:43 +0000

@Gary - Thanks. Took a little work to get that one right. I had fun writing it though.

By: Gary R. Hess

Gary R. Hess — Wed, 16 Jul 2008 01:00:30 +0000

I like how you held the poem together with these two lines:

“Searching for that little one.”

“Before the clock turned 7:01″

Having the ending have both really puts it all together as well.